blue Monday and october write day 26-loop poetry, plus short story slam week 31: happy halloween

Image Benji Barratt Clark Twohill Sullivan

Blue Monday – Eye Check

Looping Around

 
Bluebell Books Twitter Club!
tiptoeing cross the computer room
refreshing from last night’s fantasy
room filled with references of old knights
fantasy retrieved from Shake Williamspears
knights riding horses in wild west
Williamspears who redo all poets works
attention focuses on Gloria Luncinda

tiptoeing between days and nights
sampling well crafted free verses
nights that make dark shadowy fears
verses that dance like Lake Lawrence
fears that conquer our perfect common senses

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Lawrence that hosts Jayhawks of Kansas
october month paves a way to Norway

7 thoughts on “blue Monday and october write day 26-loop poetry, plus short story slam week 31: happy halloween”

  1. whimsygizmo October 26, 2015 / 4:20 pm

    I like the progression here. Nice use of the form. 🙂

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  2. Deepti Agrawal October 26, 2015 / 4:40 pm

    “room filled with references of old knights
    fantasy retrieved from Shake Williamspears”

    “fears that conquer our perfect common senses”

    loved these phrases

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  3. sally October 26, 2015 / 6:22 pm

    Hi Benji,

    How sweet. Please come back and tell me what you think of my post.

    Thanks for playing today.

    Have a Beautiful Blue Monday!

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  4. Sunita Prasad October 26, 2015 / 7:22 pm

    Very interesting. Loved the way you shifted Shake Williamspears 😉

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  6. restlessjo November 8, 2015 / 7:26 am

    Sounds like fun! And such a pretty owl 🙂

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